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05-24-2013, 10:11 AM (This post was last modified: 11-24-2014, 08:22 PM by Hana Song.)
Here is my team for OU competitive use. Can I get some critique on it? Any suggestions and comment are welcomed and will definitely be taken into consideration.

+Terrakion:
Item:Salac Berry
Ability: Justified
Moves:
-Substitute
-Swords Dance
-Stone Edge
-Close Combat
EV's:
252 Atk
252 Spe
4 SpD
Nature: Jolly
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+Volcorona:
Item:Leftovers
Ability:Flame Body
Moves:
-Quiver Dance
-Fiery Dance
-Bug Buzz
-Roost
EV's:
240 HP
252 Def
16 Spe
Nature: Bold
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+Thundurus-T:
Item: Life Orb
Ability:Volt Absorb
Moves:
-Nasty Plot
-Hidden Power Ice
-Thunderbolt
-Substitute
EV's:
4 Def
252 SpA
252 Spe
Nature: Timid
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+Jirachi:
Item: Leftovers
Ability: Serene Grace
Moves:
-Iron Head
-Wish
-Protect
-Thunder Wave
EV's:
252 HP
224 SpD
32 Spe
Nature:Careful
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+Starmie:
Item:Leftovers
Ability:Natural Cure
Moves:
-Thunderbolt
-Rapid Spin
-Hydro Pump
-Ice Beam
EV's:
252 SpA
4 SpD
252 Spe
Nature: Timid
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+Heatran:
Item:Leftovers
Ability:Flash Fire
Moves:
-Lava Plume
-Stealth Rock
-Protect
-Toxic
EV's:
248 HP
252 SpD
8 Spe
Nature: Calm

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05-24-2013, 10:17 AM
Yeah, here's my suggestion. You kind of need to show us the moves. Smile

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05-24-2013, 11:34 AM
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05-24-2013, 02:38 PM (This post was last modified: 05-24-2013, 02:38 PM by ninJAS.)
The team overall is fairly solid but it is a little weak to Water and Ground which are both extremely common attack moves.

I would suggest getting rid of Heatran since you already have a Special wall in Jiriachi and Heatran kinda skyrockets the two weaknesses I mentioned before.

Ferrothorn is probably the best defensive replacement you could add over Heatran in all honesty. It will also be able to take most physical hits fairly well which will take a lot of pressure off of your Jirachi. It can set up hazards (Rocks or Spikes), help your Jirachi in spreading Paralysis with Thunder wave, give the rest of your team a little extra HP recovery through Leech Seed, and help against the Water and Ground types with a STAB Power Whip.

Just did a quick look over your team and I play more defensive most of the time so I'm sure someone else can give you a more offensive option if you would rather have it ^^

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