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Everything Was Beautiful
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06-25-2015, 05:22 PM (This post was last modified: 06-25-2015, 05:35 PM by Luigi's Purple Coins.)
I wrote this poem awhile back for a poetry competition on a Zelda forum, and thought I'd share it with you all.

Everything Was Beautiful

In the beginning
the land was lush and green.
The skies were clear and blue,
And life blossomed.
It was truly a pleasure to the eyes.

The residents of the kingdom were happy,
Not many frowns or tears clouded their faces.
As they went about their daily activities.
Adults worked hard and watched over the children,
While the children played both in the houses
And outside in the fresh fields or on the soft forest floor.

And everything was beautiful.
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06-30-2015, 06:41 PM
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On a more serious note, what kind of rhythm do the words of your poem have for them? I can see the theme of the poem itself, but what about your word choices? Do you have any science behind those?

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07-01-2015, 12:12 AM
No, I don't have any science-I know poetry usually has some kind of rhythm but I didn't really know how to give the poem that rhythm. I'm still really new at writing poetry.
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07-01-2015, 04:26 PM
Syllables and rhyme counts are the most common, though it's possible to use similar ideas or even synonyms...or, if you're particularly daring, any combination of the above.

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