United Generations

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United Generations

Chapter 1: Making Friends

A Lone Fennekin starts on a Journey, and sees a Heracross & a Rhydon, goes up to them and says hello. when all of a sudden a Vaporeon swims close to them and playfully splashes them Rhydon however runs away from the water to avoid getting wet. Seeing this Vaporeon Uses Water gun to getting Rhydon wet, Rhydon however not liking getting soaked one bit goes into a Rampage. Seeing this all the pokemon backs away except one. Rhydon then charges straight for Fennekin. Fennekin Runs & Runs & Runs, However Rhydon continues to chase poor Fennekin into a canyon. Things aren't looking good for Fennekin what will happen to Fennekin ?



Chapter 2: A Rocky Situation


As things were looking bad for Fennekin a sleeping Larvitar was rammed by Rhydon. not liking being woken up this way Larvitar pounding the ground with it's feet started an earthquake. Rhydon suddenly  lost it's balance, & Rocks in the canyon starting to fall around the three pokemon. Rhydon was getting hit by the rocks but it barely hurt, Fennekin however was having trouble dodging the rocks that were falling. Some small rocks were hitting Fennekin, Fennekin didn't know how long it could continue this. Suddenly a Huge rock  
was starting to fall & at this rate all three pokemon (Fennekin, Rhydon, & Larvitar ) would be trapped if not crushed by the Huge rock.


-to be continued-


( Stay tunned to find out what happens next in Chapter 3 )

what does everyone think should i continue this ?

has this lost interest to everyone else ?

I'd read it Fennekin! You should continue the story.

I'd read it Fennekin! You should continue the story.

thank you everyone for the great advice

I think you should continue with this story, as well! ^_^

any ideas / suggestions on what should be in upcoming chapters ( this will be a group effort if you can suggest anything )